27 January 2012

Barometer

The wind pushes dark sky
warm and swollen
to make room
for the brittle sun,
to ease the clouds
clogging my head.



Namaste...

3 comments:

  1. I like the few words that describe so much - my head was bad yesterday too...

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  2. The words clouds and clogging are a very nice choice in my opinion, as far as the simile they present and the alliteration are concerned.

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  3. Freya, the weather has been doing a number on everyone's heads. May yours feel better soon.

    Claudia, thank you -- to tell the truth, I had not noticed cloud/clogging adjacent to each other. Peace...

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